Thursday, November 19, 2009
short story
Beyonce Minaj was the most coolest girl in school and everybody admire her from teachers to students. Every girl wanted to dress like her and every boy wanted her to be there girl and every time she walks down the hall people stop and stare. She had all the new outifts and shoes and all the girls wanted to them. Beyonce Minaj was getting tired of all the people staring at her and wanted to be like her. One day a couple of girls decided to dress exactly like her and when they got to school people were wondering why they decided to dress like that. When Beyonce Minaj seen them she was upset because some of the uncool people were dress just like her. She went up to them and asked them why they were dress like her and they answered we wanted to be like you. Beyonce Minaj wasn't happy with that so she got mad and smacked all 4 girls that was dress like her. Only 2 girls reacted to the smack and started fighting back. But what the girls didn't know about Beyonce Minaj was that she was a kick boxer and she been training for 10 years. So beat up both the girls and send them to the hospital. Ever since that day nobody ever tried to dress like her and people still admire her coolness.
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ANIAS!!!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your story. Your character's name is funny. Beyonce Minaj was cool because of the way she dressed. All the girls wanted to be like her. I also thought that her fighting could be considered cool in certain places. I know around the "hood" its considered cool because your tough and you can hold your own. I think you should have read it over for spelling mistakes.Good story :)
Good story - captures several elements of being cool - being unique, getting attention, being dominant, inimitable.
ReplyDeletethis was a funny story. I thought the coolest part of this character was that she was so independent at what seemed like high school. She stood out so much that everyone wanted to be like her, but then she beat the shit out of them for being like her. She knew what she wanted and she could back it up with her training
ReplyDeletehilarious!!! I was smirking the entire time while reading. You caught my attention and kept me interested the entire time. This story shows two types of cool's , the first in which everybody wanted to be like Beyonce Minaj and they all admired her and wanted to dress like her and all. The second was Beyonce Minaj having been trained in boxing and able to just easily smack 4 girls across the face and them not able 2 do much about it. This shows that cool people can want, but if you try too hard, you gon get bitch slapped.
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