Wednesday, November 4, 2009

outline

I want to write about how digital technology can affect or society


thesis:digital technolgy has affect our society in many ways that we are not able to notcie the good and bad things about it. Not being able to notice these things kind of brain wash us into not seeing things in our own point of view.


argument 1: the good and bad about digtal tecnology


argument 2: how the movie walle uses a good example of digital technology


argument 3: my personal opinion on digital technology

conclusion

1 comment:

  1. i feel like this outline is too broad so i cant really get a strong feel of your topic and what you want to write about.

    on the bright side i like that you have a good strong thesis now the rest of your worries should be trying to find enough evidence to back it up.

    goodluckk.

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