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to stephanie

I see that you have a good plan on what you want to write about. I think if you make good connections and give good examples your paper would be strong. I think you should make your thesis more brief and more explination about what you are trying to prove. What is going to be the main points in your allegory? I also chose wall-e as one of my topics and I think that was a perfect example because of all the brain washing they were using in the video just to convince people to get on the space ship thingy. But good luck with you paper and I hope you do well Anias