TO MICHELLE: hey i like your story it kind of reminds me of grease when they wore leather jackets and have the slick here with the gel. i like you didnt try to make a story from today in our time but had the idea to make a story based on back in the 70s.
TO BRYANNA:joe is ass i dont know what makes him think he could be cool by doing things like that but overall it was a good story by choosing to talk about how some people would do too much just to fit in
TO CHRIS R: interesting story choice, you chose to talk about a divorce dad and how his son thinks his mothers new boyfriend is cool because of a motorcycle rather making a story about some cool kid in school and how everyone wants to be like them.
TO JESSICA: wow you took a whole other turn with your story, being cool wasnt good because she tried to do too much so she started failing. i think that was a good idea because you give a good example of how being cool can also mess you up academically.
ANALYSIS:From reading some of the stories being cool is having the latest things and being known by a lot of people. Also being means a lot of people wants to be like you but what they don't know is being cool can also bring consequences. For example in Jessica's story her main character shaquiqua wanted to be cool so much that she started doing bad in school and when she notice that she wasn't doing as good as she knows she should be doing she changed her ways and gave up on being cool and decided to focus more on her grades to get everything back together.
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